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Assignment five feedback – Applying the techniques of illustration and narrative

What follows is my tutors feedback for my final assignment in The Art of Photography.

Overall Comments

The images for this assignment are technically challenging. I was under the impression that ordinary flash heads were not brief enough to freeze water droplets, but I can see at a quick glance that you have managed to get some excellent shots. I shall now look through in detail.

Feedback on assignment Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Quality of Outcome, Demonstration of Creativity

The brief is to illustrate a magazine cover and several pages inside. You begin with your cover shot, which is a very good example of this type of picture. There is a strong symmetry in the image, though the shapes are undoubtably organic. Your stated intention was to mimic a magazine article on the technique of shooting frozen water droplets and your writing begins well. You give the reader good advice, clearly indicating the equipment (both photographic and non), You show set up images which illustrate your technique and there is even a droplet and ripple in the set up shot, which is a nice touch. There is a second droplet picture, which is simpler than the first image, but still a very good shot in its own right. You also show the back of the flash unit and I can see behind that there is daylight coming in through the window. How did you prevent this from affecting your exposure? Did you pull down the blinds, or shoot later in the evening?

Your advice about flash power, depth of field and speed are very informative, and you also advise on lens choice. This is all good for the article. 

I notice that your boom arm which is holding the bag of water is quite extended, and it would probably be wise to inform your readers to put a counter weight on the other end. The advice about giving a point to focus on is good and you helpfully suggest moving the drip to align with it once the hole is made.

The advice about aperture and power settings is good, but when explaining anything technical, it is worth bearing in mind that reading about it often makes it seem a lot more complicated than doing it and the explanation must be put over to the reader as simply as possible. So far you have explained everything well and not assumed any level of competence on the part of the reader (something which immediately diminishes your role as a teacher -which you are -if you engage in writing technical articles).

One thing that keeps cropping up is the odd typing error –this must be noticed and corrected if writing for a magazine. Always check and re check before sending.

One of the most important bits of advice you give is to check the images on the computer before dismantling the set. Seeing the images large and checking critical focus will immediately separate the good images from the bad, something which is much more difficult on the back of the camera, even when magnified.

You finish with a great shot of a crown shaped splash, which works really well. If the quality was up to it, I would like to see it larger in the frame, but even at this size it is good. The bands of dark ripple across the top give tone and interest to what would otherwise be a flat area of colour. 


A very realistic magazine article, with good, clear advice and illustrated with high quality images. With a bit of ‘tidying up’ of the text this could be submitted to an actual magazine for publication.

Learning Logs or Blogs/Critical essays Context

Your blog is well kept up and you have posted many interesting examples of your exercises and research.


Charity Auction – SOLD

I entered one of my images to a charity auction, it was printed to 30x40cm on aluminum sheet. It was one of 74 local artists work on auction and sold in the top 10% on the night for $550. Really pleased for the charity and that my work was considered desirable by those bidding.

Image entered :


OK so can’t wait till after Xmas

OK so only a few days ago I told myself and this blog that I would wait, till after Christmas before I started a new module. But I already seem to have bought myself a copy of Photoshop, downloaded  ‘The Digital Photography Workflow Handbook’ to my Kindle and ordered the Digital Photographic Practice module… Happy Christmas! 🙂

Assignment five – Applying the techniques of illustration and narrative

In this final assignment for the Art of Photography we were asked to produce images to illustrate a story for a magazine. There is a cover to illustrate and several pages inside, 6-12 images in total. Equipment used Fujifilm Xpro-1 and 18mm lens for illustration. Nikon DSLR, 105mm lens, tripod, flash and diffuser for main images; cover and other water images.

I have chosen to produce an illustration for a photographic magazine  to show how to capture the motion of water drops. Not having any DTP software is a limitation, note to self yet another purchase required, but I will do my best with the tools I currently have i.e.  a limited knowledge of WordPress.


Cover shot:



Water, water everywhere…

Water is a fascinating subject and combined with motion is an interesting photographic topic which lends it’s self well to both blurring or freezing motion. This article will help you understand how you can create the images like the cover of this magazine and on the pages that follow.


The setup for the shoot (you will take many shots) is a considered process. First you need a solid waterproof surface to work on, in my case there was no better place than my kitchen bench, which is also at a good hight for close-up work such as this. The bench having a cutout for the stools that normally live there means I can get the tripod in very close to the work top.


Place a clean paint tray (or any other dark container i.e. a deep baking tray) close to the side of the bench you are going to work from. Setup the tripod and camera to look into the tray, framing so to exclude the sides, front and back. On the opposite side setup the flash unit level and behind the tray.


I have chosen to use a studio flash and a soft box here but you can also use a battery speedlight flash on an extension cord and bounce of a reflector. There are advantages and disadvantages to both methods. The smaller battery gun has less light output (and therefore less DoF in the image) but at short burst settings of 1/64th power gives a very brief flash of light freezing motion well. The studio mains light tends to have a longer discharge duration (and has to be kept at low outputs to compensate) but outputs considerably more light even at short bursts and therefore greater DoF is possible, important for such close-up macro work.


As for the lens, you will either need a macro/micro lens or a normal lens with extension rings to be able to get in close the tray and water. To give you a guide I have used a 105mm micro lens of a full frame camera, so 60mm on an APS-C would be similar.


Once this setup is in place make sure everything is aligned, the camera, tray and flash then add a second stand with the head over the tray as this will hold a bag of water. With a jug fill the tray with water right to the very brim. Get a ziplock bag, a sandwich one is perfect, fill this about 1/3 full with water and seal the top. Attach this bag (ziplock upwards) to the stand above the tray then visually align the bag so it looks to be about mid point over the tray.

Make sure your flash is on, set to manual and I would suggest starting at the lowest power setting regardless of it being a battery gun or mains unit. The reason being is that it will produce the shortest duration flash and your best chance to freeze the motion of the dripping water. This can be re-adjusted later if required.


Now you are getting to the point of taking some pictures, well almost. Make sure the camera is on manual focus and use your finger or a nail to help you focus on the water surface where you want the drips to fall.


Use a pin to place one small hole in the bottom corner of the ziplock bag, this will now start to drip every second or two, and fine tune the placement of the stand to ensure it is dripping at your focus point.

With the camera on manual exposure set your shutter speed to your flash synchronisation speed, in my case 1/250 make a test exposure at f8 to start and take a good look at the histogram for the test image. If the image is too dark I would suggest increasing the flash power ie if set to 1/64 increase to 1/32 power, the reason I say this is that anything less than f8 becomes a real hit and miss affair on the drops being in focus, at such macro distances, as they tend to move around a reasonable amount shot to shot. Alternatively if you can, try to bing the flash or reflector closer to the subject at these distances a matter on inches can dramatically improve the exposure without increasing the power. For a battery flashsetup I would have the reflector touching the back of the tray. If you have the luxury of a second gun I would bring that out to play also.


If the image was over exposed then stop down further, as you can see in the shot of the camera top I was using f22 , this gave me the correct exposure, good DoF and meant not just the drops but also a lot of the resulting ripple remainded in acceptable focus. As a tip, I would strongly recommended increaseing your ISO to a more sensitive setting rather than increase the flash duration or opening the aperture wider than f8.

OK so now you’ve made your test and adjusted the exposure and fine alignment in the frame you are ready to shoot. My prefered method, as is often on a tripod is to ignore the viewfinder and the LCD, I look over the top or side of the camera and time the trigger (remote release is optional but prefered) by watching the action unhindered. Especially for this type of photography you are much better able to observe and timing the shutter firing much, much better to the point at which after a few minutes practice you get it right almost every time.


After a few exposures check the LCD for timing, exposure and framing once more to make sure you are truly happy with all the above. From then on its up to you how many images you take before you get ‘the one’, a good sequence or both. As you can see from the images there are a number of unexpected variations that appear over a resonable timeframe shots, those that were inverted or crowns where not what I had originally invisaged. If exposure, focus and framing are a given the angle of view has the most dramatic effect on the end results in my opinion, try to get as low to the water as you can whilst controlling the framing ie no background objects.


Once you are happy with the shots its time to start having a look at them on a big screen to check them, apart from exposure and framing, check the focus carefully. I’d do this before you dismantle the setup, theres nothing worse than pulling everything apart to realise on closer inspection that you have not quite got the shots you wanted. As you can see I also decided to colour the final images with a blue filter. Have a play with these and see what you prefer. Plus You can experiment with inks and milk, or even progress the other liquids add a shutter trigger to the setup or start using small pumps to produce multiple effects, the options are limitless, perhaps the topic for another article…



So that was the end of Assignment Five and the end of The Art of Photography, which is great to have finished but I am also sad to see the end. I can wholeheartedly say that I have very much enjoyed the module and am so glad that I did not  claim previous credit for the Level 1 courses (hope I will say the same for the next two 😉

So onto the next two Level 1 modules…well perhaps after Christmas!


44 Juxtaposition

This exercise is to explore juxtaposition in a single shot. I have chosen to take the still life approach for a cover illustration of a book. This took me on a journey of thinking a lot about what to photograph and how. Then I started to also look at book titles and text to see what associations and objects I could find.

Equipment used Nikon DSLR, 105mm lens, tripod, 2x light stands, 2x flashes, roses, fake blood and hard board.


So the title I eventually chose was :

Bloody Valentine


As you can see form the images below I changed the blood pattern, flower position and camera angles many times before I was happy with some of the shots. This image I felt was the most graphic, feeling like I was laying on the floor next to the roses, seeing my own blood on the floor. I also like the reflection of the roses in the blood from this angle. Getting the colour of the blood and the right pattern as not easy and I am still not completely happy with the results. Im told to stop being a perfectionist…below are some of the other images that almost made it from the cutting room floor…

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42 Evidence of Action

The objective here is to produce one photograph in which it can be seen that something has happened.

Equipment used Nikon DSLR, 105mm lens, tripod, flash and diffuser.

I worked through a number of possible options here, breaking/broken glass, toppling glass of wine, amongst others, some where more action than evidence (after the event) of action. I finally settled on the one below:


Split milk….

Though a simple shot… I took many shots before I was happy with the final image, in the end casting the tripod aside as I was finding it to constrictive. The image above is the last of about 40 shots and one of the last few taken with the camera off tripod.




41 A narrative picture essay

Tell a story in a set of pictures.

Originally for this exercise I took a number of images that to be frank where just too ‘static’ which never made it into the final cut for the exercise. The images I have used are ones I have tried to liven up with movement either by freezing or blurring the action in the image! I don’t have any DTP software so have had to lay them out using my limited knowledge of WordPress. The subject of my photographs is making pancakes..

Equipment used Fujifilm X-pro 1 and 18-55mm lens. Nikon DSLR with 105mm lens, Nikon Speedlight flash. Processing with Nikon NX2 and DXO.



The star ingredients


Place about 100g of flour into a bowl


Then add an egg into the flour


Whisk the flour and the egg together with a splash of milk.DSC_6388_DxO

Heat up a pan


And pour in the mixture and cook till golden 


Add some sugar


And some juice if you wish…


But most of all … Enjoy!

I deliberately went down the path of excluding people in the images, as I considered it would de-tract from the story. I have consciously kept the text brief below each image brief just enough to give context to the proceeding image and action, wanting it to be more about the pictures than the words. I feel there is more to explore here in my approach and intend to come back to this at a later stage.